Hey Amanda, I prefer this one to the first because the wrapper sort of gives it more feeling that its not actually film (in my opinion at lead!) maybe try pulling back a bit? the tension at the bottom of the crop with the wrapper is a bit distracting for me and its quite symmetrical. maybe try off-centring it just a little bit more. But definitely prefer this more "in use/eaten" progress than the first! Alex G
Hey Amanda, I prefer this one to the first because the wrapper sort of gives it more feeling that its not actually film (in my opinion at lead!) maybe try pulling back a bit? the tension at the bottom of the crop with the wrapper is a bit distracting for me and its quite symmetrical. maybe try off-centring it just a little bit more. But definitely prefer this more "in use/eaten" progress than the first! Alex G
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alex, a little more space along the bottom would be nice. That camera also has one hell of a dirty viewfinder.
ReplyDelete-Locrin Stewart
That blurry wrapper is so distracting, its so smack in my face that I can hardly look at anything else, do you have any without that wrapper in it??
ReplyDelete-Kailee