i like the second one the most. however, i'd se if you could try to make the spacing a little bit less hap-hazard as i find it's throwing me off. also, maybe use the eyedropper tool and try to find a tone in the shots (one of those muted sort of browny-grey colours maybe? the yellow and white are both a bit too bright for me. either play with colours or try to reduce the spacing so its thinner - almost mimicking the framework of the windows perhaps? like the idea though :) very cool! Alex G
Hey Paige, I agree with Alex, I think you should try spacing them a little more evenly. Also is that the same door 4 times? I think I'd like to see it only repeated once or for it to be only that same door repeated several times at different angles, distances, etc Bre
I love how you stuck with the idea of following/counting with the exit numbers. This really unifies the group of images, but what battles that is the images being neither straight on, nor on angles. Because they are all shot from almost 'random' positions, it feels a little.. sporadic. If you had more options from the day you shot, maybe you could try sticking to one or two styles (angle-wise) and space them more evenly? Great idea ! Becky Turner
i definitely like the white borders highlighting the different angles and views. i think it is very simplistic and balanced, well done. -christine johnston
I think maybe if you cut down the amount of images in the collage like section it will become less distracting I find it too busy right now. And the white boarders I think! Yurisa clarke
i like the second one the most. however, i'd se if you could try to make the spacing a little bit less hap-hazard as i find it's throwing me off. also, maybe use the eyedropper tool and try to find a tone in the shots (one of those muted sort of browny-grey colours maybe? the yellow and white are both a bit too bright for me. either play with colours or try to reduce the spacing so its thinner - almost mimicking the framework of the windows perhaps? like the idea though :) very cool! Alex G
ReplyDeleteHey Paige, I agree with Alex, I think you should try spacing them a little more evenly. Also is that the same door 4 times? I think I'd like to see it only repeated once or for it to be only that same door repeated several times at different angles, distances, etc
ReplyDeleteBre
I love how you stuck with the idea of following/counting with the exit numbers. This really unifies the group of images, but what battles that is the images being neither straight on, nor on angles. Because they are all shot from almost 'random' positions, it feels a little.. sporadic. If you had more options from the day you shot, maybe you could try sticking to one or two styles (angle-wise) and space them more evenly?
ReplyDeleteGreat idea !
Becky Turner
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ReplyDeletei definitely like the white borders highlighting the different angles and views. i think it is very simplistic and balanced, well done.
ReplyDelete-christine johnston
I think maybe if you cut down the amount of images in the collage like section it will become less distracting I find it too busy right now. And the white boarders I think!
ReplyDeleteYurisa clarke