This looks pretty good concept wise, though a few things I would change. For example, the little part under her leg is kind of a distracting detail, and also her tattoo is also distracting. I'd like it a tad cooler, but that's just a personal preference. Good job on the first one to upload! :)
I don't know why it says Amanda either! So confused!! I'd agree with Lucy on the thing under her leg - the weird white blip thingy is rathe irritating (don't know what it is?) Maybe crop up on the bottom the tiniest bit to get rid of the awkwardness under her leg.... I disagree about the tattoo, however. In fact, I had to search for it. That silver pole and hand towel (??) annoy me much more. I think the contrast of them on the pale background is making them compete with the girl and food (which given the theme) I'm assuming is the focus. Other than that, I sort of enjoy the grossness, in a weird-cringey way! And props to being the first to upload, as Lucy said! Alex Gooding
Thanks for the Crit guys! I'm gonna take this back into photoshop and work on it a bit more taking into consideration what both of you mentioned. I'm gonna strip everything out (tattoo, pole, soap holder?, tiny wrapper and towel under her leg), and see what I like in and out! I'll re upload later today with a revised, or two revised versions!
I'm a but confused as to why this woman in clothed, in a bath tub having sexual relations with her food? What do you feel this piece is about? Is she a weird woman who uses burgers instead of soap?
This looks pretty good concept wise, though a few things I would change. For example, the little part under her leg is kind of a distracting detail, and also her tattoo is also distracting. I'd like it a tad cooler, but that's just a personal preference. Good job on the first one to upload! :)
ReplyDeleteoops, that previous comment was me, Lucy, not Amanda...I don't know why it says Amanda.
ReplyDelete-LUCY
I don't know why it says Amanda either! So confused!! I'd agree with Lucy on the thing under her leg - the weird white blip thingy is rathe irritating (don't know what it is?) Maybe crop up on the bottom the tiniest bit to get rid of the awkwardness under her leg.... I disagree about the tattoo, however. In fact, I had to search for it. That silver pole and hand towel (??) annoy me much more. I think the contrast of them on the pale background is making them compete with the girl and food (which given the theme) I'm assuming is the focus. Other than that, I sort of enjoy the grossness, in a weird-cringey way! And props to being the first to upload, as Lucy said! Alex Gooding
ReplyDeleteThanks for the Crit guys! I'm gonna take this back into photoshop and work on it a bit more taking into consideration what both of you mentioned. I'm gonna strip everything out (tattoo, pole, soap holder?, tiny wrapper and towel under her leg), and see what I like in and out! I'll re upload later today with a revised, or two revised versions!
ReplyDeleteIt looks sweet!, love the fact that she's wrapped in a garbage bag!, and yes, i agree with the tattoo, but other than that, sweet idea :)
ReplyDeletesorry , forgot to "comment as,
ReplyDelete-Meabh :)
Hi Matt
ReplyDeleteI'm a but confused as to why this woman in clothed, in a bath tub having sexual relations with her food? What do you feel this piece is about? Is she a weird woman who uses burgers instead of soap?
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