Hey guys! Just wanted to do something simple with mine and this is what I ended up with. Not sure which one I like better though. Feedback would be appreciated :)
hmmm, its a tough call, because in the first one, the little dark, burned spot on the fry is a little distracting, but at the same time, i like the empty space of the table. On the other hand, the second pictures fries really lead your eyes toward the burger. Either way, they both have great qualities :) -meabh mcgrory
totally agree with meabh. maybe your solution is to go with the second picture but make the first front few fries in focus? especially the one touching the hamburger. Just a thought! - Giordana
I agree with Meabth that I think both pictures are a little dark. However, I love the burnt part of the fries! Makes it looks good enough to eat yet this is sort of the reality of it or something. I'm not going to lie before I enlarged it, I thought the burned mark was a little tiny bug and I would have loved that. Just a little simple gross little bug. Maybe something to think about if you wanted to go that road? Way to keep it simple though. Good Job!
hmmm, its a tough call, because in the first one, the little dark, burned spot on the fry is a little distracting, but at the same time, i like the empty space of the table. On the other hand, the second pictures fries really lead your eyes toward the burger. Either way, they both have great qualities :)
ReplyDelete-meabh mcgrory
totally agree with meabh. maybe your solution is to go with the second picture but make the first front few fries in focus? especially the one touching the hamburger. Just a thought! - Giordana
ReplyDeleteI like the second one better! I like the fact that the burger is in focus as opposed to the fries, very simple but i like it!
ReplyDelete-Hayley Buckham
I agree with Meabth that I think both pictures are a little dark. However, I love the burnt part of the fries! Makes it looks good enough to eat yet this is sort of the reality of it or something. I'm not going to lie before I enlarged it, I thought the burned mark was a little tiny bug and I would have loved that. Just a little simple gross little bug. Maybe something to think about if you wanted to go that road? Way to keep it simple though. Good Job!
ReplyDelete- Jordynn Colosi
Hi Alycia
ReplyDeleteFraming and composition are weak on both...crop is way too close.
-Robyn