I was trying to convey "fast food" by the food being "fast" get it get it? I think my idea kinda failed, but I'd still like to know your opinions, oh and I haven't edited besides crop...
I think your model needed to look more distressed and maybe added the hand would have helped it as well. I like the colour in it though. Also, maybe try to from a few different angles like shooting down the lines of animals to see the mouth at the back. Might help create distance in the image.
yea thats what i originally wanted to go for, but you can't shoot animal crackers from the front, i was going to do it with dino chicken nuggets but they don't exist anymoreeee
Hey! I like your concept! My initial reaction besides that: I'm not really getting a sense of speed from the "animals". I don't know how you might stage it differently, but I think incorporating distance as a factor could be worth trying, as well as adjusting the model's expression/movement. -Katii Capern
I like!!! What if you added a slight motion blur behind the animal crackers in photoshop to create the effect of them running away? I like her expression... its so non-challant like "yeeeeeeeeahhh i'm going to eat you... and enjoy every second!" :) Bre Elbourn
Yes, this seems like one of those strange confusing stock images. Why is the woman happily yelling at animal crackers? Why is she in this strange neon blue no-space context? What is this image about?
I think your model needed to look more distressed and maybe added the hand would have helped it as well. I like the colour in it though. Also, maybe try to from a few different angles like shooting down the lines of animals to see the mouth at the back. Might help create distance in the image.
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yea thats what i originally wanted to go for, but you can't shoot animal crackers from the front, i was going to do it with dino chicken nuggets but they don't exist anymoreeee
ReplyDeleteHey! I like your concept! My initial reaction besides that: I'm not really getting a sense of speed from the "animals". I don't know how you might stage it differently, but I think incorporating distance as a factor could be worth trying, as well as adjusting the model's expression/movement.
ReplyDelete-Katii Capern
I like!!! What if you added a slight motion blur behind the animal crackers in photoshop to create the effect of them running away? I like her expression... its so non-challant like "yeeeeeeeeahhh i'm going to eat you... and enjoy every second!"
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Bre Elbourn
Yes, this seems like one of those strange confusing stock images. Why is the woman happily yelling at animal crackers? Why is she in this strange neon blue no-space context? What is this image about?
ReplyDelete-Robyn
they are supposed to be running away!!!!
ReplyDeleteFood that is fast because they are running!
I'm re-shooting a new concept don't worry
thanks tho