I find the top one kind of has a weird perspective, can you try fixing that in post? I think I still like the top one better, I find the second one has a lot going on, too much going on and I just don't know where to look. -Abby
the more saturated colours in these definitely works. i like how the firs tone takes you in to the picture but it would be nice to see the ruler a bit straighter. the second one your eye stops with the skater. i would try different lighting so less of the picture is in the shade, it cuts it off a bit horizontally. love this spot though, great job katii! -Alison
Im digging the over saturation in the second image as well as the composition of the second one much more. I think it's a great shot as it is! Good job :) Giordana
I find that with the second one, I feel that there's too much going on and it confuses my eye. I'd also take the saturation down a little bit, but I don't like bright colour in general, so that could just be a personal preference. I agree with Abby that the perspective in the first on is a little wonky, but otherwise I quite like it. If you could find a way for the verticals and horizontals to play off each other, I think it could be really interesting.
I find the top one kind of has a weird perspective, can you try fixing that in post? I think I still like the top one better, I find the second one has a lot going on, too much going on and I just don't know where to look. -Abby
ReplyDeletethis is soo cool! i definitely like the top one, it has great leading line.
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the more saturated colours in these definitely works. i like how the firs tone takes you in to the picture but it would be nice to see the ruler a bit straighter. the second one your eye stops with the skater. i would try different lighting so less of the picture is in the shade, it cuts it off a bit horizontally. love this spot though, great job katii!
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Im digging the over saturation in the second image as well as the composition of the second one much more. I think it's a great shot as it is! Good job :)
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I find that with the second one, I feel that there's too much going on and it confuses my eye. I'd also take the saturation down a little bit, but I don't like bright colour in general, so that could just be a personal preference. I agree with Abby that the perspective in the first on is a little wonky, but otherwise I quite like it. If you could find a way for the verticals and horizontals to play off each other, I think it could be really interesting.
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I prefer the first one, but it needs to be straightened , I still find it a bit distracting because of all the people in the background though
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