On white (and only on white) this could really work as a vertical diptych. I'm not a huge fan of the different styles of writing/design drawn in the first image, I think just the geometric shapes would look great if they were integrated elsewhere in the images as well.
doing the class-crossover bit here... i'm going to agree with this catching my eye because of the lighting, sense of space, montone colour, and the different geometric shapes. i don't think the writing strengthens the first image, but would be curious to see some of the shapes from the first one mixed with the second. unmarked film canisters without their lids on would become more ambiguous, while still working well with your theme. not crazy about the horizon line in the background.
the whole thing is starting to make think of a neat/odd futuristic tentcity. -claire
I prefer the second image. The colour ...or lack of... is nice and the space is nice. I like the subtle reflections of the paper triangles!
ReplyDeleteI also like the second one, so simple but very intriguing. - Abby
ReplyDeleteI like the first one more! But maybe if you are having a really hard time deciding make it a diptych ??
ReplyDeletegiordana
On white (and only on white) this could really work as a vertical diptych. I'm not a huge fan of the different styles of writing/design drawn in the first image, I think just the geometric shapes would look great if they were integrated elsewhere in the images as well.
ReplyDeleteVery clean work!
Becky Turner
doing the class-crossover bit here...
ReplyDeletei'm going to agree with this catching my eye because of the lighting, sense of space, montone colour, and the different geometric shapes. i don't think the writing strengthens the first image, but would be curious to see some of the shapes from the first one mixed with the second.
unmarked film canisters without their lids on would become more ambiguous, while still working well with your theme. not crazy about the horizon line in the background.
the whole thing is starting to make think of a neat/odd futuristic tentcity.
-claire