HI CLASS!!!
So this is anything but a final. I have another idea and I'm reshooting. This was just a thing I threw together on a whim. I figured that it's silly just to think of only people as being grouped into families. So I cut up some fruit and made it look like they're hugging. Again, this is a silly idea, but I wanted to do something with a different sort of take on it. A slightly silly take.
-Locrin Stewart
good idea bout the dust/scratches on the table are distracting. Getting rid of them would take away a scene for the fruit (not good in this case) but keeping them is distracting. Maybe reshoot with a different backdrop (maybe a kitchen counter/bookshelf etc)
ReplyDelete_Giordana Vescio
You have to produce this better. I would avoid black. Everything needs to be more evident and cleaner. This idea will only work if it is very apparent....now it is unclear.
ReplyDelete-Robyn