i like the Idea and i see were your going, I personally like the last one best, I think if you shot the entire family all on the couch just interacting as you have it would make a really cool shot, I think the rest of the room is very distracting and doesn't focus on the family that looks like is your main goal. basically i love the shot, if you don't re-shoot id love to see the cropped out bottom of the couch. The last shot has so much family love going on.
I actually like the idea of just random shots of the kids. They're adorable! I just think that to better execute this idea, you need to control your composition better. So even if the photos are candid, you are aware of your composition and where everything is. For example, I'd maybe have more space on the left hand side of the last photo and more at the bottom for the first one. Anyway, see what you can do! - Lucy
i like the Idea and i see were your going, I personally like the last one best, I think if you shot the entire family all on the couch just interacting as you have it would make a really cool shot, I think the rest of the room is very distracting and doesn't focus on the family that looks like is your main goal. basically i love the shot, if you don't re-shoot id love to see the cropped out bottom of the couch. The last shot has so much family love going on.
ReplyDeleteI actually like the idea of just random shots of the kids. They're adorable! I just think that to better execute this idea, you need to control your composition better. So even if the photos are candid, you are aware of your composition and where everything is. For example, I'd maybe have more space on the left hand side of the last photo and more at the bottom for the first one. Anyway, see what you can do!
ReplyDelete- Lucy
I definitely love the slight dysfunction in all the photos. It captures what a family really is. The third image is by far my favorite. Great job!
ReplyDelete- Jordynn Colosi
Paige
ReplyDeleteIf you go for one, the last one is strongest in terms of context and telling a story.
-Robyn