Cropped
Un-Cropped (Like I really need to explain this..) I took out the cheesy poof!
In a way, there is a personal reflection in the photograph, of my "current" family; my father and step mother, who could have just as easily have been the couple that I saw on the Subway that day.
**I think I'm gonna go with the cropped version. But I've gotta rescan the negative first!
**I think I'm gonna go with the cropped version. But I've gotta rescan the negative first!
really great shot matt, and I love the story attached to it to, it gives the picture a very interesting perspective. I love the colours, temperature ext. buutt the only thing bugging me a bit is the left side, on the floor to the right of the seat, (aka the line on the ground), i'd get rid of that. :p
ReplyDeleteWritten by me... Giordana! ^^
ReplyDeletedsalkdjas I can't even. Matt. I love this photo so much. Tbe lighting, the emptiness around them. Their expressions are spot on. I wouldn't change anything. You can try cropping out the ceiling just to see what it looks like. But yeah. It's wonderful.
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And the girl's reflection! So good. Did they notice you taking the photo?
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Thanks so much guys!! I'm really happy with how it turned out too! I'll try taking that line out and see what I think (you mean the like white random thing, right? I think it was a cheese puff now that I think about it...)
ReplyDeleteLucy, I looked at it cropped quickly, I like it, but I like the bar and the light in there too. I'm gonna upload a cropped version to this post and I'll see what everyone thinks!
And a clarification for everyone, this wasn't the couple, it was staged as I slightly mention in the post. I shot it with my Bronica on a tripod at something like 1/15th of a second, If I would have shot the couple I doubt I would have gotten a sharp photo
I'd also edit out the people in the other train (to reinforce the emptiness in the relationship)!
ReplyDeleteGiordiee
**and by people i mean only the head you can see in the window of the door lol
ReplyDeleteI really like how if you look at the reflection of the girl she is looking into the camera, but her real self is looking at the window, it's a detail that really adds something interesting to the photo !
ReplyDeleteYou know what! I don't think i like the cropped one, i think i like the full framed one better. Giordie
ReplyDeleteI love this Matt! It looks too good, I thought it was staged! I personally like the full frame one, too... but that may just be my personal distaste for those particular types of aspect ratios talking lol.
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