Wednesday, 29 February 2012

Rebecca Turner - High School

Pretty self explanatory, whether it was our own emotions, or those of someone close to us.
High school was, for me, an amazing four years. But no matter how many great friends and fun events surround you, darkness always exists.

Any advice would be seriously appreciated !
In the mean time I'm going to learn how to write the letter A better...
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  1. Lucy29 February 2012 at 21:32

    I find the interaction between the yearbook standing up and the notebook lying down to be a little awkward. Maybe try them both up or both down. I'm not a huge fan of the blood...seems very melodramatic, and the shape doesn't look appealing or realistic. Sorry! Ideally I think you can use something else to represent darkness. Or make the blood very subtle.

    - L

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  2. noononwednesday20 March 2012 at 21:28

    Becky

    This seems a bit heavy handed and obvious. I agree that the composition is awkward. Not quite sure what the significance of the second smaller book is supposed to be....you're relying too much on your text to tell the story your picture should tell visually.

    -Robyn

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