High school was, for me, an amazing four years. But no matter how many great friends and fun events surround you, darkness always exists.
Any advice would be seriously appreciated !
In the mean time I'm going to learn how to write the letter A better...
I find the interaction between the yearbook standing up and the notebook lying down to be a little awkward. Maybe try them both up or both down. I'm not a huge fan of the blood...seems very melodramatic, and the shape doesn't look appealing or realistic. Sorry! Ideally I think you can use something else to represent darkness. Or make the blood very subtle.
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Becky
ReplyDeleteThis seems a bit heavy handed and obvious. I agree that the composition is awkward. Not quite sure what the significance of the second smaller book is supposed to be....you're relying too much on your text to tell the story your picture should tell visually.
-Robyn